FarSun
China
Communication Services™
Fast, Inexpensive
English Editing and Polishing
Corporate Marketing
and Sales
快速、价格公道的英文编辑和润色
Better Communications =
More Sales ($$$)
Plus: Now offering
Chinese to English Translations
我们现在也提供中文翻英文的服务。
We
would like to offer you our fast, inexpensive English editing and
polishing
services. We will quickly enhance your company description
and
improve your product descriptions to increase sales. Think of it
as a
marketing "tuneup" for your website and sales materials.
Cultural and societal
differences often make it difficult
for non-native writers to compose effective communications in the
English
language. A poorly written
e-mail response to a query, or a
grammatically incorrect product description on a website, can chase
away
potential customers. On the other hand,
well written and carefully composed communications will enhance the
image of
your company and increase sales.
We specialize in tuning
and polishing—adding finesse and
pizazz—to transform your English text into a powerful sales tool. A sample is included below.
Our business is to help your business!
Send us your documents in
English
and your website polishing requirements and we will give
you a fixed price for the
job and will bill you with a PayPal invoice after completion. Most assignments will be completed within 48
hours.
Example of a Product
Description: Emergency Power Kit
We now have two
translators available--one in China and one in the U.S. Both are
fluent in both Chinese and English.
Contact us for Chinese to English
translation rates.
如
需了解中文翻英文的价格,请和我联系。
We
also offer English to Chinese translations!
Think of us as your
personal assistants. All communications
will be kept
confidential. See examples below.
Example 1:
Company Description Before
Editing and Polishing
Xiamen Health Electric
Co.,
Ltd. is located in the beautiful coastal city---Xiamen Special Economic
Zone,
with an area of 8000 square meters. The company has adopted more than
100 sets
of internationally advanced analytical and testing instruments as well
as
inspection equipments. In fact, it is a manufacturer specializing in
research,
development, production and marketing of massage and health care
products with
self-brands.
Our company passed ISO 2001:9000 quality system certification. In
addition,
most of our products won PSE(Japan) CE ROHS,UL and VDE certification.
We strive
for best quality and best products for our customers. We have many
customers in
Europe, Central and South America, Middle East and all over Asia. We
continue
to grow and enter new markets. We keep develop new products suitable
for
diverse markets. In improving ourselves, we strive to satisfy all needs
of our
customers.
The business scope of the company lies in massage cushion, massage
chair and
relative electronic products.
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Example 1: Company Description After Editing and Polishing
Xiamen
Health Electric Co., Ltd. has been a leader in the research, design and
manufacturing
of high quality massage and health care products since 2002. We are proud that our brand of
“Golden Sun” massage chairs, cushions and
health care products are respected worldwide for their innovative
design, high
quality and customer satisfaction. Our
company is growing with a research and development staff of 12 product
engineers; a skilled manufacturing force of 150, and a highly talented
management and export team. Our exports
are increasing 30% each year and we have the capacity to ship six
containers
every month with a delivery time of less than 30 days.
We
are located in the Xiamen
Special Economic Zone where our modern 8,000 square meter factory is
well-equipped with over 100 types of advanced analytical, testing and
inspection equipment. All of our
products meet the highest quality standards and are ISO 2001:9000
system
certified; plus most have PSE (Japan), CE ROHS, UL and VDE
certification. We provide one year
guarantees on all of our
products.
Our
customer base ranges from
Europe, Central and South America to the Middle East and Asia. We have a staff of
six experienced, Japanese fluent and English fluent, export
managers on call; ready to provide personal service and fast order
delivery. Currently we ship 10,000
massage cushions and 1,000 massage chairs per month,
We
are continuing to expand
into new markets as we diversify our product line,
At present, we are releasing
22 new products per year.
Our
design engineers welcome requests for new product concepts and will
work closely
with your group to quickly meet your needs. We
have the proven ability and experience to
produce samples of new
product designs within seven days.
Our
goal is to establish
long-term relationships with our customers while providing strict
quality control
standards and fast product delivery. If
you are looking for innovative design and superb manufacturing for high
quality
massage chairs, cushions and related health care products, please
contact us.
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Example 2: Product Description Before Editing and Polishing
Detailed Product Description
Feature:
1.the pipeline is made of all the red copper
and conducted by
heat transfer medium liquid..water can't flow in vacuum tubes and
operated when confined.the manifold uses Aluminum alloy mould material
of high strength wiht air folw design.it is furnished in good style.
2.can withstand high pressure when it works.
3.module design,arbitrary combination,which
can meet the
demand of large water consumption,
& Manifold (inerior):red copper
& Manifold (exterior):aluminum alloy
& Glass tube dimensions:58mm×1.8m
& Daily efficiency: ≥55%
& Hail resistance:25mm
& Max pressure:12 bar
& Coating of vacuum tube:ALN/AIN-SS/CU
& Heat pipe:anti-freezing > -35
centigreed
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Example
2: Product Description After
Editing and Polishing
SF-1800/58-AC Product
Features:
·
The solar collecting
surface of this product is highly
efficient at heating water for the home, business, or school.
·
The heat pipes are
constructed of long-lasting copper for
long durability.
·
The aluminium alloy
framework is corrosion resistant and
stylish in appearance.
·
During normal operations,
the system is capable of
withstanding high pressures while delivering a large volume of hot
water.
·
Glass tube dimensions = 58 mm x 1.8 m.
·
Daily efficiency =
greater than 55%
·
Highly resistant to hail
damage
·
Totally functional at a
maximum pressure of 12 bars
·
Vacuum tube coating;
ALN/AIN-SS/CU
Heat pipes capable of
withstanding frigid conditions of less
than 35 degree centigrade
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Example 3: E-Mail Correspondence Before Editing and Polishing
Thanks
very much
for your great inquiry, We appreciate it very much.Glad to hear
that you
are interesting of solar products. Althought our advantage product
is
solar water heater, I also feel like taking this great opportunity to
introduce ourselves for you without wasting your percious time.
XYZ
Solar Water
Heater Co.,Ltd,is engaged in R&D, Producing, selling of solar water
heater
for several years, Which owns professional engineers, skilled workers,
advanced
technology ,rich manage experience, and strict quality control system
and so
on. You are welcome to visit our new english website www.xyz.com
to
check it.
Of
course,
I herein feel like recommending one type for
you, That
is nonpressurized solar water heater,, You know, for our domestic
market and
other international market , For example, Turkey, Ltaly, France, Chile
,
Vietnam , India , South Africa and So on, Nonpressurized Solar Water
Heater is
very popular , Because of its high quality ,low cost.convenient
installation.
Pls be rest assured that we always believe the long term business
relationship
must be established on the basis of mutual benefit and equality.Please
check
our quotation. And if any question , pls contact me without hesitation.
I
feel like sending Our latest products' catalogues to you, But it
is too
large to send , So would you kindly talking with me by MSN or SKYPE?
looking
forward to communicating with you face by face.
Obviously,
If that
is not your exactly products, Would you kindly sending it to your
friend
or other customers who may be interest in the quotation. I
will
appreciate it very much.
Ok,
I am Ms XYZ ,
Enjoy writing to you and looking forward to make good friends with you
Best
wishes,
Ms.
XYZ |
Example 3: E-Mail Correspondence After
Editing and Polishing
Thank
you very much for your recent
inquiry. Since 1990, XYZ Solar Water
Heater, Co’s team of researchers, engineers, skilled workers and
superior
management have made our company a world leader in the growing field of
solar
water heaters. Please visit http://www.xyzsolarheaters.com for a complete listing of our
products and
services.
I
heartily recommend our non -pressurized solar
water heating systems. These are
especially well suited for use here in China as well as Turkey, Italy,
France,
Chile, Vietnam, India and South Africa. The
non-pressurized systems offer the advantage of
low cost installation
combined with high reliability.
I
would be happy to discuss our latest
products with you using MSN or SKYPE. Please
let me know when this would be convenient and
feel free to
forward this communication to any of your business associates that may
be
interested in XYZ Solar Water Heater, Co’s product line.
My direct line is x-xxx-xxxx.
I
look forward to hearing from you soon and developing a longlasting
relationship with your company.
Best
Wishes
Ms
XYZ
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You will
also receive a document that
reflects the edits.
Thank you very much s very much for your great inquiry,
We appreciate it very much.Glad to hear
that you
are interesting of solar products. Althought our advantage product
is
solar water heater, I also feel like taking this great opportunity to
introduce ourselves for you without wasting your percious time. Since 1990, XYZ Solar Water Heater, Co’s
team of
researchers, engineers, skilled workers and superior management have
made our
company a world leader in the growing field of solar water
heaters.
Please visit http://www.xyzsolarheaters.com for a complete listing of our products and
services.
XYZ Solar Water Heater Co.,Ltd,is engaged
in
R&D, Producing, selling of solar water heater for several years,
Which owns
professional engineers, skilled workers, advanced technology ,rich
manage
experience, and strict quality control system and so on. You are
welcome to
visit our new english website www.xyz.com to check it.
I heartily recommend our non -pressurized
solar
water heating systems. These are especially well suited for use
here in
China as well as Turkey, Italy, France, Chile, Vietnam, India and South
Africa. The non-pressurized systems offer the advantage of low
cost
installation combined with high reliability
Of course, I herein feel
like recommending one type for you, That is
nonpressurized solar
water heater,, You know, for our domestic market and other
international market
, For example, Turkey, Ltaly, France, Chile , Vietnam , India , South
Africa
and So on, Nonpressurized Solar Water Heater is very popular , Because
of its
high quality ,low cost.convenient installation. Pls be rest assured
that we
always believe the long term business relationship must be established
on the
basis of mutual benefit and equality.Please check our quotation. And if
any
question , pls contact me without hesitation.
I feel like sending Our latest
products'
catalogues to you, But it is too large to send , So would you kindly
talking
with me by MSN or SKYPE? looking forward to communicating with you face
by
face.
Obviously, If that is not your exactly
products,
Would you kindly sending it to your friend or other customers
who
may be interest in the quotation. I will appreciate it very much. I would be happy to discuss our latest
products
with you using MSN or SKYPE. Please let me know when this would
be
convenient and feel free to forward this communication to any of your
business
associates that may be interested in XYZ Solar Water Heater, Co’s
product
line. My direct line is x-xxx-xxxx. I look forward to
hearing from
you soon and developing a longlasting relationship with your company.
Ok, I am Ms XYZ , Enjoy writing to you and
looking
forward to make good friends with you
Best
wishes,
Ms.
XYZ
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