FarSun China Communication Services™

Fast, Inexpensive English Editing and Polishing

Corporate Marketing and Sales

快速、价格公道的英文编辑和润色

Better Communications = More Sales ($$$)

Plus: Now offering Chinese to English Translations
我们现在也提供中文翻英文的服务。

We would like to offer you our fast, inexpensive English editing and polishing services. We will quickly enhance your company description and improve your product descriptions to increase sales. Think of it as a marketing "tuneup" for your website and sales materials.

Cultural and societal differences often make it difficult for non-native writers to compose effective communications in the English language. A poorly written e-mail response to a query, or a grammatically incorrect product description on a website, can chase away potential customers. On the other hand, well written and carefully composed communications will enhance the image of your company and increase sales.

We specialize in tuning and polishing—adding finesse and pizazz—to transform your English text into a powerful sales tool. A sample is included below. Our business is to help your business!

Send us your documents in English and your website polishing requirements and we will give you a fixed price for the job and will bill you with a PayPal invoice after completion. Most assignments will be completed within 48 hours.

Example of a Product Description: Emergency Power Kit

We now have two translators available--one in China and one in the U.S. Both are fluent in both Chinese and English.

We also offer English to Chinese translations!

Think of us as your personal assistants. All communications will be kept confidential. See examples below.

Please contact me for your writing and editing needs.

Ron S. Nolan, Ph.D.
222 Santa Cruz Avenue, No. 11
Aptos, CA, USA 95003
1 (831) 688-3158
nolan@farsun.com

Download Nolan's Resume

Example 1: Company Description Before Editing and Polishing

Xiamen Health Electric Co., Ltd. is located in the beautiful coastal city---Xiamen Special Economic Zone, with an area of 8000 square meters. The company has adopted more than 100 sets of internationally advanced analytical and testing instruments as well as inspection equipments. In fact, it is a manufacturer specializing in research, development, production and marketing of massage and health care products with self-brands.
Our company passed ISO 2001:9000 quality system certification. In addition, most of our products won PSE(Japan) CE ROHS,UL and VDE certification. We strive for best quality and best products for our customers. We have many customers in Europe, Central and South America, Middle East and all over Asia. We continue to grow and enter new markets. We keep develop new products suitable for diverse markets. In improving ourselves, we strive to satisfy all needs of our customers.
The business scope of the company lies in massage cushion, massage chair and relative electronic products.

Example 1: Company Description After Editing and Polishing

Xiamen Health Electric Co., Ltd. has been a leader in the research, design and manufacturing of high quality massage and health care products since 2002. We are proud that our brand of “Golden Sun” massage chairs, cushions and health care products are respected worldwide for their innovative design, high quality and customer satisfaction. Our company is growing with a research and development staff of 12 product engineers; a skilled manufacturing force of 150, and a highly talented management and export team. Our exports are increasing 30% each year and we have the capacity to ship six containers every month with a delivery time of less than 30 days.

We are located in the Xiamen Special Economic Zone where our modern 8,000 square meter factory is well-equipped with over 100 types of advanced analytical, testing and inspection equipment. All of our products meet the highest quality standards and are ISO 2001:9000 system certified; plus most have PSE (Japan), CE ROHS, UL and VDE certification. We provide one year guarantees on all of our products.

Our customer base ranges from Europe, Central and South America to the Middle East and Asia. We have a staff of six experienced, Japanese fluent and English fluent, export managers on call; ready to provide personal service and fast order delivery. Currently we ship 10,000 massage cushions and 1,000 massage chairs per month,

We are continuing to expand into new markets as we diversify our product line, At present, we are releasing 22 new products per year. Our design engineers welcome requests for new product concepts and will work closely with your group to quickly meet your needs. We have the proven ability and experience to produce samples of new product designs within seven days.

Our goal is to establish long-term relationships with our customers while providing strict quality control standards and fast product delivery. If you are looking for innovative design and superb manufacturing for high quality massage chairs, cushions and related health care products, please contact us.

Example 2: Product Description Before Editing and Polishing

Detailed Product Description

Feature:

1.the pipeline is made of all the red copper and conducted by heat transfer medium liquid..water can't flow in vacuum tubes and operated when confined.the manifold uses Aluminum alloy mould material of high strength wiht air folw design.it is furnished in good style.

2.can withstand high pressure when it works.

3.module design,arbitrary combination,which can meet the demand of large water consumption,

& Manifold (inerior):red copper

& Manifold (exterior):aluminum alloy

& Glass tube dimensions:58mm×1.8m

& Daily efficiency: ≥55%

& Hail resistance:25mm

& Max pressure:12 bar

& Coating of vacuum tube:ALN/AIN-SS/CU

& Heat pipe:anti-freezing > -35 centigreed

Example 2: Product Description After Editing and Polishing

SF-1800/58-AC Product Features:

· The solar collecting surface of this product is highly efficient at heating water for the home, business, or school.

· The heat pipes are constructed of long-lasting copper for long durability.

· The aluminium alloy framework is corrosion resistant and stylish in appearance.

· During normal operations, the system is capable of withstanding high pressures while delivering a large volume of hot water.

· Glass tube dimensions = 58 mm x 1.8 m.

· Daily efficiency = greater than 55%

· Highly resistant to hail damage

· Totally functional at a maximum pressure of 12 bars

· Vacuum tube coating; ALN/AIN-SS/CU

Heat pipes capable of withstanding frigid conditions of less than 35 degree centigrade

Example 3: E-Mail Correspondence Before Editing and Polishing

Thanks very much for your great inquiry, We appreciate it very much.Glad to hear that you are interesting of solar products. Althought our advantage product is solar water heater, I also feel like taking this great opportunity to introduce ourselves for you without wasting your percious time.

XYZ Solar Water Heater Co.,Ltd,is engaged in R&D, Producing, selling of solar water heater for several years, Which owns professional engineers, skilled workers, advanced technology ,rich manage experience, and strict quality control system and so on. You are welcome to visit our new english website www.xyz.com to check it.

Of course, I herein feel like recommending one type for you, That is nonpressurized solar water heater,, You know, for our domestic market and other international market , For example, Turkey, Ltaly, France, Chile , Vietnam , India , South Africa and So on, Nonpressurized Solar Water Heater is very popular , Because of its high quality ,low cost.convenient installation. Pls be rest assured that we always believe the long term business relationship must be established on the basis of mutual benefit and equality.Please check our quotation. And if any question , pls contact me without hesitation.

I feel like sending Our latest products' catalogues to you, But it is too large to send , So would you kindly talking with me by MSN or SKYPE? looking forward to communicating with you face by face.

Obviously, If that is not your exactly products, Would you kindly sending it to your friend or other customers who may be interest in the quotation. I will appreciate it very much.

Ok, I am Ms XYZ , Enjoy writing to you and looking forward to make good friends with you

Best wishes,

Ms. XYZ

Example 3: E-Mail Correspondence After Editing and Polishing

Thank you very much for your recent inquiry. Since 1990, XYZ Solar Water Heater, Co’s team of researchers, engineers, skilled workers and superior management have made our company a world leader in the growing field of solar water heaters. Please visit http://www.xyzsolarheaters.com for a complete listing of our products and services.

I heartily recommend our non -pressurized solar water heating systems. These are especially well suited for use here in China as well as Turkey, Italy, France, Chile, Vietnam, India and South Africa. The non-pressurized systems offer the advantage of low cost installation combined with high reliability.

I would be happy to discuss our latest products with you using MSN or SKYPE. Please let me know when this would be convenient and feel free to forward this communication to any of your business associates that may be interested in XYZ Solar Water Heater, Co’s product line. My direct line is x-xxx-xxxx. I look forward to hearing from you soon and developing a longlasting relationship with your company.

Best Wishes

Ms XYZ

You will also receive a document that reflects the edits.

Thank you very much s very much for your great inquiry, We appreciate it very much.Glad to hear that you are interesting of solar products. Althought our advantage product is solar water heater, I also feel like taking this great opportunity to introduce ourselves for you without wasting your percious time. Since 1990, XYZ Solar Water Heater, Co’s team of researchers, engineers, skilled workers and superior management have made our company a world leader in the growing field of solar water heaters. Please visit http://www.xyzsolarheaters.com for a complete listing of our products and services.

~~I feel like sending Our latest products' catalogues to you, But it is too large to send , So would you kindly talking with me by MSN or SKYPE? looking forward to communicating with you face by face.~~

~~Obviously, If that is not your exactly products, Would you kindly sending it to your friend or other customers who may be interest in the quotation. I will appreciate it very much.~~ I would be happy to discuss our latest products with you using MSN or SKYPE. Please let me know when this would be convenient and feel free to forward this communication to any of your business associates that may be interested in XYZ Solar Water Heater, Co’s product line. My direct line is x-xxx-xxxx. I look forward to hearing from you soon and developing a longlasting relationship with your company.

~~Ok, I am Ms XYZ , Enjoy writing to you and looking forward to make good friends with you~~

Best wishes,

Ms. XYZ